One Halloween
morning it was quiet all through the house. Until Logan woke up and decided to
go downstairs for breakfast. As Logan crept down the stairs he stopped and
stared. He looked around and couldn't see anyone. The house was dark and a tad
bit frightening. Logan called for his
dad, but not a soul responded. Logan called
for his mom and the room might have became even more silent. Logan
looked around and couldn't find anyone, not his dad, mom, or even his brother
Austin. He let out one more shout looking for a someone to answer, but no one
did.
When Logan stood
there in his living room he cried to himself, "where has everyone
gone?" Then Logan heard something, it was a scowling sound; it was a voice
of a ghost that had stopped into town.
Logan more scared than before tried to hide behind the couch. But it was
far to late for hiding, the ghost had already found him. During the time when
Logan was hiding behind the couch he thought up a plan. The ghost moved closer
and closer to him. Finally the ghost got close enough to the couch for Logan to
follow through with his plan. Logan pushed the couch over on top of the ghost
and had just enough time to run through the front door of his house.
The cool air hit
Logan's thin pajamas and he could barley feel his toes, but he new he had to
get away from that ghost. Logan started sprinting down his street not looking
back. He had noticed nobody was outside only the their cheap Halloween
directions in their front lawns. As Logan was sprinting past every house,
decoration, and driveway he began to notice something moving and it wasn't the
ghost trailing behind him. The Halloween decorations started to move. The ghost
and witches were flying, people with pumpkin heads creeping, and vampires
feeding on the blood of animals.
Logan kicked into
gear and started sprinting even faster, somewhere far away from the witches
laughter. The monsters followed him down the street, which only made him go
faster. As much as the monsters wanted to catch him they couldn't. After all
they just running for dinner and he was running for his life. After sprinting
11 blocks Logan began to get tired, but the monsters were not. Logan knew he
had to get out of there, he ran two more blocks saw his friend John's house. He
made the fast choose to duck into his house.
Quickly he locked
all of the doors and looked out the window. The monsters were gone, and the
decorations weren't on the lawns. Logan knew that the monsters were still out
there so he went down to the basement to hide.
"Surprise!"
Everyone shouted.
"Oh my gosh,
I'm so happy to see you guys," Logan said, "there are monsters
outside we all have to hide!"
"You mean these
monsters?" Logan's friend John questioned as all of the people pulled
masks out from behind his mask.
"Yeah.."
stuttered Logan, "You guys are the monsters?"
"Yeah man we
totally got you," stated John.
"But how did
you pull it off?" Logan asked.
"Well, early
this morning I hid in your house and made ghost sounds as everyone else sat on
side on their lawns. After I scared you out of your house, you ran down the
street and everyone else started to follow you. Late last night we hung some
decorations of Witches and ghosts in trees so that in all of the chaos it
looked like they were flying. Then when you went into my house, we all snuck
around the back and we went through the basement door," said John proudly.
"But why'd you
do it?" Logan asked.
"Because, last
week you put a grape in my sandwich," replied John.
"You almost
scared me to death because, I put a grape in your sandwich?" Logan said
angrily.
"Well when you
put it like that it doesn't sound to good," John said under his breath.
Since then every
Halloween Logan and John pull pranks on each other. Every year the pranks get
worse, and every year they laugh about it in the end. To this day Logan still
regrets putting that grape in John's sandwich.
This is a fun piece, and clearly demonstrates your ability to use punctuation appropriately with dialog. Well done.
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